I closed my eyes and picked this to post...Good or bad idea?


  • Eyes See You

    I am who I am thatâ ™s how I feel
    At least when I stay inside
    There you are waiting as I emerge
    Letâ ™s see who strikes first
    The way you see me seals the moment
    Before I reach the mirror its over
    You judge with the blindness that justice promises to bear


    The way we look the way we talk
    The car you drive even where you park
    How much do you make what are you worth
    Did you earn it fairly or get rich at birth
    Look at his clothes torn shirt and jeans
    What a loser for sure a man of no means
    Your own private road to your gilded estate
    Ensconced in your mind you love how we hate
    Where did he grow up whereâ ™d he go to school
    Oh I know his family none of them are cool
    So much hate so much more than race
    All the knives come out but not in your face
    The stares the glares shooting myopic views
    Judging all without one step in their shoes
    Tillâ ™ death theyâ ™ll despise us never will they stop
    For to keep us down is how they stay on top


  • YIKES!!
    Yikes, because it is so well written,
    yikes, because it is too often true.

    We all need a better view.
    ma


  • Am I wrong, that I little care
    For end or beginning and journeys fate
    Of no own will, no path to map
    Life waits as a beggar at a gate.

    I am proud, to that Iâ ™ll agree,
    Would rather die than to any bow
    Spend life in darkened poverty
    For shame upon he who retains me where

    My heroes dead and the living bound
    I am angry when faced with this hound
    Who laughs at my helplessness whilst tormented he
    Berates my nonexistence of an eternity.

    Such horrors in the world, greater woes than mine
    ⠘⠙They would all be free, if you⠙d only try.⠙⠙
    Goading an action he will undoubtedly impede
    with devious trickery, yet reason will succeed

    Who does one call to, and who would care
    For the burning remnants of a shining past.
    Knew full well my fate, and did capture berate
    Yet the wickedness dwells with me here.

    Who should we battle, with whom do we war
    The west is an evil, denyâ ™s its presence meawhile
    The east is as yielding as blind sheep to a fool
    As they follow the orders of a cunning, devious stool.

    I witness Gods dying and like he I wish too
    That my life be ended if no future my fate
    Hell prospers and grows as the devil shows
    What is heaven, filled bellies and money in ones purse.

    How wealthy and prosperous they must think me afar
    A woman of means, an ex luminary star.
    How little they know of cold rooms and bitter tears
    Of a soul long forgotten by a world passed by.

    Menfolk downtrodden by harlots who hated
    The blessed amongst women, now look at her, laugh
    Itâ ™s said she lives, as a zombie on a hill
    And none know or hear here, except her passing by.

    Old friends come to call, one they know of an ancient
    Who lives in celestial realms from drudgery so distant?
    How little they know of the silent screams and the show
    Knowing glances, none utter what all know full well ...


  • Thank you, apologies, your beautiful sonnet was counteracted with my poisonous bile. Sincerest apologies. Love Peace Prosperity to you .... Report Abuse


  • I believe we have all been guilty of judging a book by it's cover.
    I prefer naked, Earth's Nudist Camp, no pocket books, all hard covers.


  • The view is really getting better... I am not on the bottom I am on the top.. It is all a matter of perspective is it not?

    cheers, tally ho, ariva derci and all that gaga.. I got to run..


    Oh but YES GOOD idea.. nice write..







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